Narrative- Having the idea that we're having a circular narrative with the head phones at the beginning and end is a really good idea, but make sure that the editing we do is of a standard that compliments the idea we want to create.
Genre- The balance between an upbeat and slow song is perfect. We can have a mix of longer shots with short sharp shots. The beat of the song is fast pace and slow to begin with. The lyrics themselves would be easy to lip sync to. Be careful to not make the editing dull.
Concept- Overlapping images and projects are a good idea and original. Good referencing to Jaden Smiths music video.
Performance- Try avoiding coping other performances and shots too much, its easy to copy a video that's already been made. Having shadows and projections are a good idea.
Settings- Having one setting being in a pool is a good way to link the lyrics and the images.
Advice- make sure shots aren't too long
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ReplyDeletePeer assessed by Frankie Sims