Peer assesment

Treatment- Presentation is really effective and clear. Every heading has a lot of detail. Probably could do with more target audience research.
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Lip synching- Your enthusiasm makes it more effective. The lip syncing is on point. Peer assessed by Frankie Sims
Goodwins theory- Good job but could do with a better description of what the theory actually is.
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Music video feedback-you should write how good this feed back is for your ideas and how it has helped you improve.

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Music video ideas- Ideas are really good, good inspirations; gives the audience a clear description of the idea your trying to put across.

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Production diary- Good job, detailed thorough description. make sure you don't write lots on one day and then just a sentence on another. keep it all detailed.

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Treatment

Lip syncing practice

When doing the lip syncing practise I learnt alot. I did it with my group member Paige, at first we filmed it together both singing out loud before we filmed Paige singing on her own singing out loud. Next was me, I didn't sing I just mimed and when it came to watching it back we realised that it worked better when miming as you can make it look alot more realistic. And so we re-filmed Paiges.This was helpful as now we know who is better to do the performance in our music video and also we now know not to film it singing, but miming instead. Over exaggerating looks much more realistic. By doing this we learnt what not to do and what to do in our filming of our music video.
Because we have a very upbeat song we also want to have artist interaction/dancing in our video, this will make it look more professional and also fit the conventions of a real music video.