Ellie – Overall, doing brilliant - but please consider the following:
- sort labels out on blog – just need: Music Video, Digipack, Website, Preliminary Task, Research and Planning, Evaluation, Production diary, Assessment (if you want).
- Be careful with production diary – rather than ‘today continued with eval. Qs’ – need to see much more of the impact of what you are doing on the final piece – what ideas have you adapted on this day/what have you learnt from the future? Remember the exam board want to see the ‘journey’ you are on!
- Website label needed and website research on this, with website embedded.
-Storyboard?
- Remember to comment on as many pics/powerpoints/posts as possible to develop reflection and analysis throughout.
- Website needs extra work. Seems a little basic. Needs to develop a much stronger brand identity to fit in with your star. – I know you have looked at Lana Del Ray for inspiration, but feel your images promote a stronger brand identity than what is shown through the front page of your website. Need to develop front page with something much more dynamic. Also, merchandise could be developed (again – branding). could have photo galleries, twitter update, or ‘diary’ update of what Rai is up to. Feel site needs more personality.
Ellie – Overall, doing brilliant - but please consider the following:
ReplyDelete- sort labels out on blog – just need: Music Video, Digipack, Website, Preliminary Task, Research and Planning, Evaluation, Production diary, Assessment (if you want).
- Be careful with production diary – rather than ‘today continued with eval. Qs’ – need to see much more of the impact of what you are doing on the final piece – what ideas have you adapted on this day/what have you learnt from the future? Remember the exam board want to see the ‘journey’ you are on!
- Website label needed and website research on this, with website embedded.
-Storyboard?
- Remember to comment on as many pics/powerpoints/posts as possible to develop reflection and analysis throughout.
- Website needs extra work. Seems a little basic. Needs to develop a much stronger brand identity to fit in with your star. – I know you have looked at Lana Del Ray for inspiration, but feel your images promote a stronger brand identity than what is shown through the front page of your website. Need to develop front page with something much more dynamic. Also, merchandise could be developed (again – branding). could have photo galleries, twitter update, or ‘diary’ update of what Rai is up to. Feel site needs more personality.