Peer Assessment

Frankie Sims
13th November
WWW: clear description of chosen costume and why.
EBI: you could put more images of the costume in and maybe where you got the inspiration from.

Frankie Sims
21st October
Presentation is really effective and clear. Every heading has a lot of detail. Probably could do with more target audience research.


Frankie Sims
21st October
Your enthusiasm makes it more effective. The lip syncing is on point.

Frankie Sims
21st October
Good job but could do with a better description of what the theory actually is.

Frankie Sims
21st October
you should write how good this feed back is for your ideas and how it has helped you improve.

Frankie Sims
21st October
Ideas are really good, good inspirations; gives the audience a clear description of the idea your trying to put across

Frankie Sims
21st October
Good job, detailed thorough description. make sure you don't write lots on one day and then just a sentence on another. keep it all detailed