Monday, 21 October 2013

Peer assesment

Treatment- Presentation is really effective and clear. Every heading has a lot of detail. Probably could do with more target audience research.
Peer assesed by Frankie Sims
Lip synching- Your enthusiasm makes it more effective. The lip syncing is on point. Peer assessed by Frankie Sims
Goodwins theoryGood job but could do with a better description of what the theory actually is.
Peer assessed by Frankie Sims
Music video feedback-you should write how good this feed back is for your ideas and how it has helped you improve.
Peer assessed by Frankie Sims
Music video ideas- Ideas are really good, good inspirations; gives the audience a clear description of the idea your trying to put across.
Peer assessed by Frankie Sims
Production diary- Good job, detailed thorough description. make sure you don't write lots on one day and then just a sentence on another. keep it all detailed.
Peer assessed by Frankie Sims

1 comment:

  1. At the moment, your blog is currently reaching a LEVEL 3. This is because it is showing detailed information into research and planning. You have reflected on most of your work and show a variety of ideas.

    In order to achieve a LEVEL 4, it is important that you show that you are taking on feedback and improving your work. Also, make it really clear that you are saying what you have 'learnt' in your reflections. Make sure you have labels on your blog. Continue to develop your planning into costumes, make-up, storyboarding etc.

    NSE

    Level 4 16–20 marks


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    Planning and research evidence will be complete and detailed.
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    There is excellent research into similar products and a potential target audience.
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    There is excellent work on shotlists, layouts, drafting, scripting or storyboarding.
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    There is excellent organisation of actors, locations, costumes or props.
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    Time management is excellent.
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    There is excellent skill in the use of digital technology or ICT in the presentation.
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    There are excellent communication skills.
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    There is an excellent level of care in the presentation of the research and planning.

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